🪷
その
頑張る原動力は
誰のため?
🪷
部活でも
勉強でも・仕事でも
自分のために頑張ることもあれば
大切な誰かのために
頑張ることも
(ღ′◡‵)
🪷
仲間と
喜びを分かち合いたくて?
メダルがほしいと言う後輩に入賞メダルを
あげたくて?我武者羅に
なれる貴方
🪷
レースを終えて
酸欠状態で視界が真っ暗だった
そんな話を聞くとね・・・体験したことのない
未知の世界で怖くなる
けど
🪷
倒れなくて
無事で良かった
(ღ′◡‵)
🪷
仲間がいるから
人と一緒に・繋がっているから
我武者羅になれる✨
素敵だね
🪷
団体戦
だからこそ
出し切った後に
最後まで・フリシボッテ
もう一段ギアを
上げた
🪷
視界が
真っ暗で・・・
ゴール直前数メートルは見えていない
抜かれたかと思った
らしい
🪷
最後まで
出し切って・・・格上の選手に
競り勝った
🪷
メダルがほしい
その後輩の言葉が原動力✨
アンカーは格上の選手が揃う激戦区
仲間に入賞を喜ばれて
競り勝ったと
知った
🪷
仲間に
恵まれて
支えられて
繋いだ✨タスキ
素敵な時間はいつか…
いつかおじさんになる頃には
素敵や思い出になる✨
青春の延長線
永遠に
🪷
🍀
あなたの今日が
素敵な一日になりますように
(*'▽')♪
🍀
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✿ ご訪問 ✿ くださり ✿
✿ ありがとうございました ✿
✿ (人’ ▽`)☆ ✿
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