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春休み
小さな姉妹
背負ったリュックが
背中からはみ出すくらい
小さな背中がなにかを見つめて
トコトコ歩いている
後ろ姿が可愛い
(ღ′◡‵)
🌸
何かしら?
見つめている
視線の先…頭上からチラリ
小さな指先に桜の花を
そっとつまんで
歩くと揺れる
三つ編み
🌸
雨と風で
地上に降りた花を
愛でて・大切に持ち帰る
小さな指先に見染められて💕
つぶらな瞳に映る
桜の花
🌸
花を
綺麗だな…と
大切にする振る舞いも
花を愛でる心も〈いつまでも〉
当たり前に〈ある〉訳じゃないから
幼い女の子に愛でられた桜の花
女の子の花を愛でる心に
忙しい春の中に
見出した
長閑
🌸
心が和らぐ
のどかな風景に
思わず微笑みながら
大きなリュックと三つ編みを
揺らして歩く女の子の
後ろ姿お見送り
(ღ′◡‵)
🌸
🍀
あなたの今日が
素敵な一日になりますように
(*'▽')♪
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